Sunday, October 3, 2010

I think the peer assessments really helped, I found some peer reviews more helpful than others. I really liked Sarah Millers assessment very helpful in improving my essay; she made it very evident that I needed more citations (and proper citation) from both articles in order to make sense of what I was saying; especially if you “the reader” have never read the articles. I believe in order to improve the peer assessments maybe there could be fewer questions to asses like three? But that are more specific, that way I could possibly write more in one question, because I found that I was repeating the same thing in all the peer assessment questions. I really don’t think a chat would be that great with more than me and one other person, just because I don’t think much work can get done with three people in each group. I really enjoyed the feedback I received, I agree with everything my peers had to say, and I do plan on making many changes to my paper which hopefully will make it improve.

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