For the first peer assessment I found it very helpful and fairly easy to use. I like that the groups were small which allowed me to take time to read through unlike in some classes that I had where it was read/comment/pass the paper on for either the entire class or half which made it so I could not actually add much comments of value. The only problem I had was that I could not get one of the documents to download on my laptop. Fortunately I was able to get it to download under Microsoft Notepad on my fiances computer which allowed me to read and comment.
For adjustments that need to be made on my first paper is to clean up and add to my analysis portion. I also think that I need to make more connections in between the Gere and the Eubank’s and Schaeffer essays that I chose to write on. The last adjustment that I need to make is for my own experiences need to be clearer. I had my experiences in the essay but no one knew that it was my experience because I was always taught that I am not supposed to say mine/I/me etc in an analysis essay. It is a bad habit that my high school teachers taught me and now I still have difficulty with that.
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