The review process

After completing my rough draft, I was a little nervous to begin the review process of our papers. I liked the worksheet but felt it was a little difficult to thoroughly analysis everyone's paper with in the given amount of time. I felt I could have used a little bit more time in order to give good feed back on everyone in my groups papers. I did like that we only had 4 people in each group. This meant that there was only 3 other papers to read. I found it interesting to see other peoples thought patterns for their papers and how they analyzed the articles. I would have liked to explain myself and my own thought patterns more to the people who were reading it. And maybe write an explaination about parts that I thought I had trouble with while writing my paper. I would have liked it if the other people reading mine could have written their thoughts or things would have changed right onto my paper. This way I could reprint it out and either use or not specific parts of the paper that needed to be edited and changed. I would have found that more benfitical to actually see their thoughts specifically onto the paper.
I think I will use the feedback from the other group members to help me edit my paper. I hope that their suggestions will make my paper better. I knew that when I uploaded my paper it was not as good as I would have liked it to be. Hoepfully I can take their ideas and put them to good use.